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cp33 |
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Aww! I loved it! So lovely the way you left it. Now folks will just hound you for the date!
Common sense isn't very common anymore.
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Audrey Savageau |
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Sighs....thank you for this wonderful update. It's been driving me crazy that everybody sees them as a family and they act like a family but they
haven't tried to become a family. I swear if those two didn't get their act together soon I was tempted to do a rewrite myself (thanks for saving me
from embarrassing myself). The ending was just perfect. I can't wait for your next update, please don't make us wait so long:p
"The art of being happy lies in the power of extracting happiness from common things." ~Henry Ward Beecher~
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fel617 |
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wow
loved it, all of it, i love the moments where they fall even more for the other in their minds and hearts i am so glad that she noticed his actions didn't fit the words he used after she try to talk about her non date with seth the ending was perfect
what a wonderfully, intense, passionate, sensitve and vital scene
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onlyme.pjofics |
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Brilliant!!! I'm actually a bit speechless - I'll have to comment properly once I've re-read this chapter, there was so much to take in, it's
going to take a few more reads to get it all!!! But the ending....sigh.....!!
Thank you Juliet, once again you've made my day! |
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joeypaceyfan |
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Sigh................What a lovely ending for this chapter..love it love it..
I am defenitelly falling madly in love with both Joey and Pacey.... I love how Joey confronted Pacey and then I love how you ended by Pacey asking Joey on a date..Absolutely amazing...I was actually holding my breath what Joey's response to both the kiss and the date.. Thank you Juliet. |
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mjebles |
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OH MY GRACIOUS!
What an amazing Chapter! The last part made me cry, smile, warm my heart, and bawl like a baby. So beautiful, Juliet! ... wonder if Pacey and Joey could sleep well after that kiss? Can't wait for next chapter. This time it will really be a torture waiting for the "date". |
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joeypaceyfan |
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mjebles wrote: I thought you said if they would be sleeping together after that kiss lol |
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mjebles |
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I thought you said if they would be sleeping together after that kiss lolLOL! ... well, I am hoping it will happen after the date? (generally I don't like the idea of doing that after a date, even a kiss after the "first", but for Pacey and Joey, I go for it.) LOL! Will wait for Juliet to answer that ... hee! That's why I can't wait. |
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dh1967 |
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Most definetly worth the wait! absolutely brillant! I've had to read it twice before I could comment the ending was beautiful but I like many others will
be pestering you for more because I just can't wait to see what happems next!
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Redfish74 |
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Well it's about time!!!
Finally, finally, finally one of them made a real move. I am so looking forward to the next update of this wonderful story. Chocolate Heart PJamas Creek Ho #74---Keeper of Pacey's fishing trophy Truelover #74 Lover of Pacey and Joey Hugs
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caitEcaitcait.pjofics |
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i think i echo everyones replies here when i say... YAY!!!!!
that flashback of Joey's to the near-drowning incident was fantastic---subtle and yet, giving great perspective as to how Joey's feelings often emerge much later, even after analyzing and rationalizing so damn much, haha. not to mention you made me sob like a little kid. cannot WAIT for the next update. and some more smoochies, hopefully? haha |
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WantingPJ |
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Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. I was a little frustrated toward the middle, but you worked it out. YEAH! And now a date. Man o' man..the wait it gonna kill me. ![]() |
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sarammlover |
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FUCK YEA!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
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onlyme.pjofics |
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Ok, I've had a chance to re-read, and I loved it even more the second time. The longing, the hurt, the little details you revealed about their youth, all
fantastic, but the part that made me literally swoon.....
...It would be cool and silky, wet and hot, like fresh spring water on a summer's day, and she could drink forever without that yearning and longing ever fully being quenched. The kiss that passed between them so recently had been such a tease, only the tiniest sip. And Joey was so thirsty.... Sigh..... Come back soon Juliet - can't wait to see what happens next!! |
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annie723 |
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I loved it! You made me cry, laugh, just about every emotion I could imagine. I can't wait for their date. Hurry back!
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IleanaD |
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
I knew that this would show up the day I didn't check! Lol...and now I have to be up in 4 hours so I can't even read it yet So I tried to go to bed but I just couldn't resist. I have to be up in 3 hours now but this was so worth it Juliet! This update had so much heart and honesty from start to finish...Pacey reconnecting with Jack, stupid Seth, the kitchen scene, Joey's memory, and that ending... Ileana
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FinallyPJ |
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I love coming to your page and seeing an update, Juliet. And it was a wonderful update at that. The longing that Joey and Pacey both of for one another is
really coming out, as noted by the last part of the chapter. I'm so happy that's is developing all over again. A couple made for one another.
True love stories never have endings...they live on forever.
Patches, my "pretty girl". Miss and love you always. |
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Shelay.simplyirresistable |
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Ok, so I have yet to do any commenting on this fic (at least I don't think I have done any!)...and I don't really know why, BUT this update screamed at
me to say something!
This fic is so unlike any other, which is no surprise from you, but there is just something about this particular one that makes me anxious to keep reading. I almost get angry when there isn't an update, even when I have no time to really read it! This last update was stellar. I loved how you put them both through the ringer and then back to each other...so sweet. The end was of course the cherry on top, but I loved that Pacey is getting his family back and that they see that he's happy. The Jack and Pacey friendship is probably my favorite friendship of this show, so it's nice to see that you are putting it back together...they need each other! Cannot wait for a new update, hope we don't have to wait too long! |
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1stdiva |
Flapping his arms and mouth... | ||
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While Pacey dove in and saved her.
Yes, I know, an odd way to start feedback, but this portion was so subtle, so not emphasized, it took a second read to realize that Dawson never jumped in the water, but remained on the sidelines while Pacey took action. I'm so glad that he's finally jumping in and doing it again. For a while there I thought we'd have to stick a piece of dynamite up his butt to get him to make a move - thanks for saving us all that trouble. Again, Juliet, you leave us wanting more. Thank you. |
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SweetnessAndSarcasm |
LOVELY!! | ||
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Juliet, giirrrl, I've been reading this since you first posted it but never sat my butt down to type a reply. But after this last update, I was left
with no other option!
Oh, and Meg? Cuteness! I love how you depict little babies in your stories, they're always so heartbreakindly adorable.
The first draft of everything is shit.
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